Great Expectation Questions

One of the many questions I had was that they used dialogue that not many people use now. Like, when they talked about the convicts were around the battery, or near the battery, I didn't know what they were talking about. Also I still don't know what they are talking about because I keep searching it up and it says that its and electrical cartridge, I don't think they used electricity back in dickens' day. So anyone who can answer and clarify my question please tell me what a battery is.

Group Collaboration

My Paragraph hasn't changed that much ever since my group members read my paragraph, the transitions need a little bit of tweaking but other than that everything seems to be in order. The transitions are alright when you wrap it from the introduction and the conclusion since both of them don't have the same and exact wording and is very flexible while getting the message across.

New in my Paragraph

What is new in my paragraph is basically all of the commentary, I haven't said Bunbury about 3 times and the rest of it is just about the subject the Concrete Detail revolves around. It is about the trivialities in life, trivialities in marriage, and the minor details within those subjects.