AF Evaluation

1. Melanie (Power Point): Melanie did a very good job at separating and reorganizing all the components of the novel and who did what parts. I also liked how she gave a separate section for Clover and Boxer where she described them and how boxer was betrayed for his loyalty.

2. Sean (Comic): Sean shows in his comic how each animal eventually notices their own ignorance and sees the selfishness of the pigs.

3. Zach (Song): I like how Zach actually wrote what he thought each part meant instead of just posting the video and letting everyone think of what it meant for themselves. He describes the tune as a somber representation of the corruption of power.

4. Alena (Movie Trailer): Alena described her understanding of the book creatively, The way the book was portrayed was easily understood and I like how they had a doll for every character in the book (or almost every).

5. Will (Comic): In my opinion I say will rushed his comic or didn't spend enough time on it, I don't think he tried at all to portray what had happened, but at least you saw that the pigs came into power even though you don't know how.

6. Leah (Comic): I like how Leah actually described what the pigs meant, that portrays most of the book and shows how the pigs don't actually mean most of what they say.

7. Kayla (Social Pyramid): Kayla did her project very creatively, I think it was one of the most original projects, she describes how each candidate-for-leader's views were and who would be in what sort of class, it was very well done.

8. Sara (Picture): Sara had a nice view of things where the pigs were all nice and cuddly up on the hilltop living lives nice and well when the animals are down on the bottom in the rainy area, it shows how bad the lives had become since Napolean came into power.

9. Katie (Picture): The picture was very creative, have to be honest, wasn't very well made but it was very creative, I could see clearly though at how Napolean was easily tricked into taking fake money.

10. Olivia (Haiku): I don't really understand the point of her haiku, it was like we get that Jones was despised but what comes after? I actually get the last line but the middle one doesn't make too much sense with the rest of it in my mind.

I think my animal farm project could have been a lot better, it was too rushed and I should have taken A LOT more time on it, but when I was doing it all I could think about is it being done. Now I kind of regret it and I know I should have spent more time on it, also I saw some of the ones were done in less time than mine, they weren't really all that great, they didn't portray the literary elements as well as I did, but I didn't portray as well as most people.